This Haiku is great, creative and beautiful. Some of the verses clearly portray the way many of those who suffer from poverty feel with lines like “Clinging on to dreams poverty has stricken them, share a bit of hope“. As well as ways to help those in need, “Pocket full of change could save for a rainy day, give someone in need.“. Reading this Haiku will give those insight on how one can help and how those people feel in a state of poverty through the use of a poem using literary elements to depict this message.
~ Poverty ~
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(Extended Haiku)
Pocket full of change
could save for a rainy day,
give someone in need.
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Clinging on to dreams
poverty has stricken them,
share a bit of hope.
~
Pocket full of change
help your fellow man and child,
give sunshine their way.
~
When we do our part
the beauty in gratitude
fills and warms their hearts.
~
We could do much more
United we can help build
a more loving world.





